Some Self Mockery
I had this posted on a blog I am now deleting. But the self mockery was such gold that I had to transfer it over here. Have a laugh, don't judge.
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Forward from "Trimble Hollow Junction", now gone.
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Here it is. A file from my high school pseudonym. It should be good for a few laughs. Especially if you note just how long it takes the police to find the murder. Although, for the very same reason, this is sadly probably not long enough for a good hearty one.
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BETRAYAL DEEP WITHIN
By: Valery Makenzy
The dark hallway seemed to grow darker as Halley awoke at the sound of Jordan crying. She was barely awake as she realized that the faint noise down the hall was surely her son. She got up and walked down the dark hall. The door to Jordan’s room was closed. Then how had she heard him. the noise came once again. This time she knew it hadn’t come form her son’s room but instead from the smaller back room. nobody had been in that room for years, ever since Fran had left home. As Halley got closer she noticed the noise not to be crying but a faint muffled choking and screaming. Halley, in fear for the life of both her and Jordan, backed away from the end of the hall. Then came the last few short screams and a faint gag. Then the shatter and all was silent again.
CHAPTER ONE
In the morning Halley had awoken to the sweet smell of the flowers and the soft glow of the morning sun. She had disregarded the last nights events as a nightmare and had gone on with the usual morning routine. When Halley had gone to get Jordan that morning she had walked down the hall and smelled something odd. She walked further down the hall and into the end room. As she got nearer to the end room the smell got stronger and the night events had come back so vividly. When Halley reached the door to the room she opened it. To fulfill her worst nightmare in the middle of the tiny room lay a lifeless little girl in a dull purple afternoon dress. On the floor there was no evident that someone had entered the room except for the shattered vase which had been given to her by her mother a few weeks before the tragic accident. There was not even evidence that the little girl was even dead except for the motionless body.
The police arrived a few minutes after the call was sent out. The little girl had been identified as Mary Harrisburg. The little girl who lived just across the field from them. The town was warned of the murder and the police put on alert. Halley had always wanted to get involved in a case but she never imagined that something like this would ever happen to her.
That week a new kid had arrived a few days after the murder. He was a handsome fellow and appeared to be single. He went by the name of Josh Critine. The town was in such an uproar when Josh arrived that he was barely noticed. There was only one girl who gave him any notice and that girl was Halley.
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Forward from "Trimble Hollow Junction", now gone.
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Here it is. A file from my high school pseudonym. It should be good for a few laughs. Especially if you note just how long it takes the police to find the murder. Although, for the very same reason, this is sadly probably not long enough for a good hearty one.
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BETRAYAL DEEP WITHIN
By: Valery Makenzy
The dark hallway seemed to grow darker as Halley awoke at the sound of Jordan crying. She was barely awake as she realized that the faint noise down the hall was surely her son. She got up and walked down the dark hall. The door to Jordan’s room was closed. Then how had she heard him. the noise came once again. This time she knew it hadn’t come form her son’s room but instead from the smaller back room. nobody had been in that room for years, ever since Fran had left home. As Halley got closer she noticed the noise not to be crying but a faint muffled choking and screaming. Halley, in fear for the life of both her and Jordan, backed away from the end of the hall. Then came the last few short screams and a faint gag. Then the shatter and all was silent again.
CHAPTER ONE
In the morning Halley had awoken to the sweet smell of the flowers and the soft glow of the morning sun. She had disregarded the last nights events as a nightmare and had gone on with the usual morning routine. When Halley had gone to get Jordan that morning she had walked down the hall and smelled something odd. She walked further down the hall and into the end room. As she got nearer to the end room the smell got stronger and the night events had come back so vividly. When Halley reached the door to the room she opened it. To fulfill her worst nightmare in the middle of the tiny room lay a lifeless little girl in a dull purple afternoon dress. On the floor there was no evident that someone had entered the room except for the shattered vase which had been given to her by her mother a few weeks before the tragic accident. There was not even evidence that the little girl was even dead except for the motionless body.
The police arrived a few minutes after the call was sent out. The little girl had been identified as Mary Harrisburg. The little girl who lived just across the field from them. The town was warned of the murder and the police put on alert. Halley had always wanted to get involved in a case but she never imagined that something like this would ever happen to her.
That week a new kid had arrived a few days after the murder. He was a handsome fellow and appeared to be single. He went by the name of Josh Critine. The town was in such an uproar when Josh arrived that he was barely noticed. There was only one girl who gave him any notice and that girl was Halley.
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